Travelers In Doubt

Image Credit –  Anshu Bhojnagarwala

They had stopped along the first strip of shops that came into view. They had been driving for hours along a small deserted road and being confined like that was suffocating for her.

They walked past the small piano. Though dilapidated, he was sure it had seen better days. She wandered into the store. He knelt and started to play; striking each key with precision and softness.

She rushed out when she heard the music. There were many things she didn’t know about him, having married him just a few days ago. She dried her tears.

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9 Comments Add yours

  1. granonine says:

    May all the rest of their discoveries be as pleasant 🙂


  2. gahlearner says:

    A lovely discovery, but I can’t really see the wisdom of marrying someone she knows nothing about. There’s trouble ahead.

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  3. How lovely. I wonder what else they’ll discover about each other.


  4. dorothy says:

    It’s true. You’ll be able to start really knowing the person once you’re married. Great job!


  5. Lovely little story!

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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  6. Dear I. B.

    Sounds like a pleasant discovery. Hopefully there will be many more. Nicely done



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  7. Esha M Dutta says:

    Seems like they’re going to have a wonderful start to a new life together. Nice Story.


  8. Iain Kelly says:

    A pleasing start to their life together. Let’s hope there are more good than bad things to learn about him!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Violet Lentz says:

    may she live to find out many pleasing things about him she is not aware of today. Nicely told.

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